Selasa, 01 Desember 2015

NEW EDITION! Summarizing a paragraph


What's summary?
The summary of a paragraph is the main idea of the paragraph. Often (but not always), the main idea is found in the topic sentence.

There are 3 steps to summarizing a paragraph:


  • Step 1: Read the paragraph all the way through to be sure you understand it.
  • Step 2: Check to see if the paragraph contains a topic sentence.
  • Step 3:  Write the topic sentence of the main idea with your own words and sentence structure.
 


The summary:

Christa McAuliffe from New Hampshire was chosen by NASA to be the first teacher-astronaut.
Christa already had many months of preparation and training before the mission.
But Challenger, the space ship, was exploded in air January 1986, all the crews is died in the crash.

After done the summary I felt so relief because finally I've done all my blog assignment. But......wait 2 mins.. I was at limuny with Evanda streaming for YouTube videos when we knew that the those summary we've already done several days ago wasn't the real summary assignment. Evanda said to me "Rik, is that true? Open the be smart, open the be smart!!" Then I felt just like: do not have fun first, abort mission! I repeat abort mission!! (^.^')v 

The Real Assignment

1. The English were not the first Europeans to land their ships on American soil. The Vikings had discovered North America in the 11th century. Columbus landed in the Bahamas in 1492 for Spain, and the French began expeditions to the New World in 1524. But the first English presence in North America is important because the thirteen English colonies that would later be established eventually became the country now known as the United States of America.

- The English were not the first European who landed in America, but the presence of English is important for the establisment of America.

2. In April of 1585 Sir Walter Raleigh, under the authority of Queen Elizabeth of England, sent an expedition of seven ships carrying 600 men, half of them soldiers, to found an English colony in North America. The colony was to be used to establish an English presence in the New World as well as a base from which English privateers, or pirates, could attack and plunder Spanish treasure fleets. Raleigh’s cousin, Sir Richard Grenville, led the expedition. 

- Sir Walter Raleigh sent and expedition about 600 men, half soldier to America April 1585 to found an English colony in North America led by Sir Richard Greenvile.

3. In July of that year the bulk of the fleet reached a small island off the coast of Virginia that was called Roanoke. After building a small fort on the north side of the island, the colonists initiated relations with a Native American tribe that lived on the island, the Aquascogoc. These natives showed little interest in building relations with the English colonists, and they soon parted company. After this encounter, however, the English noticed that one of their silver cups had gone missing, and they attributed its disappearance to the Aquascogoc. Grenville, the English captain, was furious. He believed that the Aquascogoc had stolen the silver cup. Whether or not this was true, angry exchanges followed and soon the English burned the Aquascogoc village. The English held their fort against the subsequent attacks of the natives.

- They reached a small island called Roanoke in July, the colonist had a good relation with Native American tribe Aquascogoc but when a silver cup gone missing the colonist blamed the natives was stole the cup then the colonist attacked them.

4. Despite their success in battle, the colonists had a miserable time because they were mainly soldiers and adventurers, not farmers. They were hungry. They missed the comforts of England, such as soft feather beds and dainty foods. Also they had expected to find gold and silver on the island, and were disappointed when they found none. Grenville soon tired of these conditions and set out on his ship to plunder Spanish treasure fleets and return to England. The colony was gradually abandoned.  

- After their success in battle, the colonist was hungry because many of them was a soldier not a farmer then they started to abandoned the colony.

5. In 1587 Sir Walter Raleigh dispatched a further expedition of three ships and 150 colonists, led by John White, to Roanoke. This time the expedition included women and children, including White’s pregnant daughter, Elenora. Shortly after they reached Roanoke, Elenora delivered a child whom they named Virginia. Virginia was the first English person born in America. But the English soon ran into more trouble with the Native Americans. A colonist named George Howe was killed by natives while searching for crabs alone on the beach. The colonists were scared. They persuaded White to sail back to England to ask Sir Walter Raleigh for help. White left behind 114 colonists, including his daughter Elenora and granddaughter Virginia. 

- Raleigh sent John White to led another expedition of 150 people to Roanoke including White's daughter in 1587. But then White must sail back to England left his colony after one of them was killed by native.

6. Unfortunately for White and the colonists, England was preparing for a naval war with Spain. All shipping from English ports was ceased. It took White three years to get his relief expedition back to Roanoke. When he returned in August of 1590, White found no sign of his daughter, granddaughter, or anyone else. They found three letters, “CRO,” carved on a tree and the full word, “CROATOAN,” on a nearby post. Possibly this referred to the Croatoan Island, which was nearby. White searched long and anxiously, but failed to find them.
  
- White had his expedition back to Roanoke three years later because England was in naval war with Spain but he couldn't find anyone.

7. No further trace of the lost colony has ever been found. Sir Walter Raleigh himself searched for the colonists in 1595, and he sent another search-party in 1602, but nothing came of either attempt. To this day no one knows for certain what happened to the colonists. 

- Then Raleigh himself looked after the colony in 1595 and 1602 but no one could find them until today.







Email to someone abroad

When I got this task, I was very very confused because I never had a friend or penpal in other country before. Lucky me, I remember that I have a close friend who likes to chatting with people from other countries. So, I told her about the task and asked her whether she has a close friend in other country. Then she gave me an email address of her friend who lives in Germany. I tried to write a draft of the mail then asked my friend's opinion about the draft whether it has impolite topic or not. After that, she was laughed at me but she said the email draft is OK, polite enough to send. Then I sent it to her German friend. I've been waited for long time for her reply and finally last Sunday she replied my email........

Voilaa



And this is her reply...












Minggu, 15 November 2015

Book report


Title: Coraline
Author: Neil Gaiman
Cover artists: Paul. A Hotaling
Illustrations: Dave McKean
Publisher: Bloomsbury (UK)
                    Harper Collins (US)
Publication date: 24 January 2002
Genre: fiction, fantasy, horror

      Coraline entering a parallel world behind an old door of her new house where she must face her evil parallel mother who is ruler of that parallel world and has a dangerous obsession with her.
When Coraline refuse to becomes the parallel mother's daughter, the parallel mother hostages her real parents in a snow globe.
So, the main story of the book is about Coraline's struggle to safe her parents. She also tries to safe the soul of three ghost children, the previous victims of the evil parallel mother.

       Coraline Jones, the main character is a brave, tough and clever girl. She is young but mature in her age. She's always tried to be calm when facing her parallel mother.
       
       Mr and Mrs Jones, Coraline real parents kinds of busy parents but loves and cares Coraline. Coraline often gets annoyed with her parents because her dad like to make an experiments with food yet her mom doesn't seem to let her "fit in". 

       The cat, a black cat from Coraline's world. The cat like a mentor in Coraline's journey in the parallel world. The cat is very sarcastic though helpful to Coraline.

       The parallel mother, the main villain on the story and the creator of the parallel world. Looks similar to Coraline's real mother but taller and thinner. She has long black hair, pair of black button eyes, pale skin, long fingers with very long red nails.

       The illustrations also greatly contributed to the whole story. It brings the dark, mysterious and odd atmosphere when I read the book. The story teaches us to be calm, brave and clever when facing a danger however we just a small person like a child.

       Overall, I enjoyed reading this book. It has interesting and engaging plot and the story is not predictable. I think that's one of the most epic children book I've ever read because the book is so different from the other children book which full of colour and happiness however it has a happy ending like another children book.
  

Selasa, 03 November 2015

Movie Review: The Green Mile (1999)

"The lives of guards on Death Row affected by one of their charges: a black man accused of child murder and rape yet who has a mysterious gift. 
      -Chris White-

Paul Edgecomb (Tom Hanks) who is in charge of Death Row in block E Louisiana prison is a nice man, and his staff also compete and humane. Except the arrogant, stubborn Percy Wetmore (Dough Hutchinson) whose aunt is marry to the governor. Paul and his staff duty is to regulate a calm and decent condition in which men prepare to die but Percy is like infection in the ward, he's mean, careless, stupid and troublemaker.

One day, a new prisoner arrives. A gigantic black man named John Coffey (Michael Clark Duncan). He has been convicted of killing and raping two little white girls. But Paul thinks that John is innocent because he's soft-hearted, he's afraid of dark and he's had straightforward gesture not like a man with anything to be ashamed of. Then Paul known John has special gift to make the other people feel the past or future events and to heal any ilness include healing Paul's serious bladder infection. After Paul know the true story behind the arrest of John Coffey, he's struggling to prove that John is innocent.

Taking set in 1935 era. Called green mile because this death row has a green floor. Based on a novel by Stephen King and has been written and directed by Frank Darabot. This movie using flashback plot because at the beginning, the scene was old Paul Edgecomb told story about John Coffey to his friend, Elaine Conelly (Eve Brent) on the nursing house.

It's one of the most emotional movie I've ever seen (but its didn't succeed to make me cry) because the movie contains  lot of strongly emotional scene like when Mr. Jingles, one of the prisoner, Eduard Delacroix (Michael Jeter) rat died because Percy the rotten stomp on it, when Eduard Delacroix death row was sabotage by Percy and when the the true story about John Coffey was revealed.

The Green Mile is a fiction, crime, drama, fantasy,mystery movie. Its has been nominated 4 time for Oscars, won 13 awards and 28 other nomination. Release in USA, 10 December 1999. Got 3.5/4 rating in Roger Ebert, 80% in Rotten Tomatoes, 8.5/10 in IMDb prove that this is a good movie whether its little bit heavy and hard to understand. You also must have long free time to watch it because its 189 minutes movie.

Paul and John
Source: http://www.rogerebert.com/reviews/the-green-mile-1999

Senin, 26 Oktober 2015

Announcement & Poster

Hi,
Just a simple announcement and a poster made by a newbie Corel draw user...



Senin, 05 Oktober 2015

Photography :D

I love taking photograph so much. Everywhere everytime when something catched my eyes, had enough time and of course in a proper conditions, I always shoot it however it's just a random things or scenery. Sometimes people around me said "what a wasting time person you are"
I can't shoot wonderful artsy pictures like professional photographer did, but I love my pictures just the way they are because in my mind they're beautiful in their own way although it's just simple picture taking by my cellphone camera.

Here some pictures from my collection



Taken in Pujokusuman and Ngasem market (right,left) by Nexian M438i camera 3.51mm ISO 428 (right) and ISO 229 at 12 June 2015 (right) and 11 April 2015.
I love traditional market scenery so when I went to traditional market I always brought my cellphone.



9 May 2015 in my warehouse by Nexian M438i camera 3.51mm ISO 1107 and edited on cellphone's photo editor.
Found these 5 girls when i was hanging around the warehouse. Because I'm a horror freak, then I asked them to posed like they're from horror movie scene. Guess they like to party all the night at the warehouse...



24 August 2015 by Nexian M438i camera 3.51mm ISO 65.
After the first day of the orientation day we sat together on C13 yard when I looked up I saw those part of C13 roof.



6 August 2015 by Nexian M438i camera 3.51mm ISO 69 (left) ISO 278 (right) around my uncle's house near Tugu station.
In that time, I was walked alone hunting for new photos for my collection.


7 August 2015 by Nexian M438i camera 3.51mm ISO 65 near my backyard.
I named him Mauu because his sound like "mauu mauu". He's not mine, he was a stray cat. Usually he looked for food around my house and when I saw him quickly I tried to found anything in my house I could have to him. But several day after those photos taken, my uncle found him died after ate idk what was it but already poisoned by rodenticide.



10 October 2015 by Nexian M438i camera 3.51mm ISO 242 at Pendopo Tejokusumo.
Found those little poor guy lying on the pendopo floor, maybe he was tired of waiting and being alone for a long time so he became like that. So sad...











Kamis, 01 Oktober 2015

Diary task

1st October 2015   21:31

Today is an adventure wkwkwk

It was in the morning when one of my classmate send the news, already prepared all my things to went to the campus then I read that pronunciation class at 9.20 am was empty....
But I decided went at 8 am like usual because the street would be so hot if I went on late morning. Last night I made an appointment with my friend from FIS to help her make poetries for her SDP task at 3 pm then she promised took me go home. So, before I walked to FBS I placed my helmet on my friend's motorcycle which parked in taman pancasila then I refer to waiting the class at taman pancasila than at FBS. Still 9 am but the class started at 11.10, I was sitting alone like a missing people, watching many people's activity on taman pancasila till approx 10.30 then I moved to FBS to attending my class..
My God, the weather was so hot when I walked to FBS but that's OK I'm fine =')

After finishing all my classes I went to FIS to met her again, after that I and she did a little trip around FE, FIS, FMIPA and FT. Before we went home, she bought new glasses at glasses seller near preksu.


Frederika

Rabu, 23 September 2015

Writing poscards

Tuesday 22 September 2015, a day before Ied Adha holiday, we came to writing for personal responses class at 9.20 but Mz. Devi was absent. So instead of go home, we decided to did the postcard and reading task together in our class.

Here is my postcard:






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Selasa, 15 September 2015

About today

September 15
Today we learn about how to write notes especially memo with Mz. Devi in writing for personal response class.
At the first, Mz. Devi told us to wrote a memo for friends or our siblings at home, because I didn't have any siblings i wrote for my mom
Like this:

Tue 11am
Mom,
Be home late
need to go to galeria mall.
Be home at 4pm.
Don't wait me for the lunch.

Erika

That's my memo after corrected by Vanda.

And then, for the second task Mz. Devi told us to make a memo contents the direction from GK 1 to PLA. So, I wrote:

"Just go outside GK 1 building, the PLA is beside the pendopo Tejokusumo"

Okay, that's my story about today in Mz. Devi's class........


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Sabtu, 12 September 2015

First post

Have no idea what should i write on the first post on my new blog 😁😁
So, i decide to tell you about my activities on September 11....
On those day, my morning class starts on 07.30 AM, but the class was empty, so on those time we just sitting in front of the class talking about random things and laughing together.

After that, we moved to the second class..after waiting for approx. 15 min the lecture came to the class and she said that our class was "tempuk" with the next class but fortunately we didn't need to change the schedule because they already changed the schedule..

After those class, we had Friday Ceremony's break, we watched "Sounds of Music" together in SALC that's my first time watching those movie and i realized that is a beautiful movie 😄😄
God spin the time so fast......felt so comfy at SALC we still had one last class 😐  so we moved to GK 1 to attend manajemen pendidikan class

15.00 time to go home~~ but then I realized that I should attend the first Mass for all Catholic freshmen at Student Center on 16.30..
But my friends prefer to go home than wait the Mass in college, so i've been waiting alone sitting in the pendopo tejo reading pride and prejudice.

The Mass ends on 19.30, its getting late night so I ask my friend to took me to the trans jogja shelter across to the rectorat. In the bus, there are only few people, the get off from the bus one by one left me with a freaky weirdo man on the bus but fortunately my destination shelter was already near. Then i get off, walked to my home and arrived at aprrox 20.30. The ends.
Sorry for my horrible grammar 😂😂